ALT0a: ... that Maud Morgan(pictured) is considered the first American to perform as a solo harpist on the American concert stage? Source: Same as above
Overall: A really interesting person to read about! I think we would need to use ALT 0a, which better reflects the claims of the sources. The only query is on the hook not appearing in the body of the article. If you can add it somewhere appropriate, this is good to go. Mystery Merrivale (talk) 10:09, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
Considered to be the first, sounds unsure but does reflect the uncertainty in the Time magazine source. Is there a possible hook that doesn't include "first"?
@Mystery Merrivale and Xoak: In light of recent brouhahas above "first" hooks, and especially considering the uncertainty of the source, I don't intend to promote either of the hooks, and as this has remained unpromoted for a month I suspect other promoters share my opinion. I would suggest devising a completely new hook. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:20, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
ALT2 of course would require the bust's picture to work, but that shouldn't be an issue since the image is licensed under CC0. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:29, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
ALT1 AGF fine, although for ALT2 I'm not seeing the phrase 'most celebrated' in the source or how it meets WP:DYKINT. I'd also quibble about the presence of refs in the lede, never mind the {{clump}}. My suggestion would be along the lines of 'that the leading American harpist Maud Morgan had to adapt piano lessons due to a lack of teachers'. I'm more bothered by the fact that Xoak seems to have stopped editing.--Launchballer 11:15, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
Xoak's userpage says they're on a wikibreak and will return in late August. I'm minded to close this.--Launchballer 08:39, 29 June 2024 (UTC)