User contributions for Icy13
A user with 97 edits. Account created on 13 July 2017.
22 February 2021
- 21:1321:13, 22 February 2021 diff hist −8 m French Revolution Fixed opening sentence grammar (still not perfect, but previously had a typo) Tag: Visual edit
26 October 2020
- 21:5321:53, 26 October 2020 diff hist +1,074 Last Week Tonight with John Oliver →Format: Added specific reference to what the show has said is its primary purpose. Tag: Visual edit
2 September 2020
- 18:5918:59, 2 September 2020 diff hist −45 Korean beauty standards →Plastic surgery: Fixed typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
1 June 2020
- 23:0823:08, 1 June 2020 diff hist +73 Jo-Ann Stores →Controversy: Corrected misleading statement about fabric sector business practices cited to misleading news article (which should be retained as it accurately portrays the controversy despite the fallacy central to the controversy (that remnants are "just scraps")). Tag: Visual edit
12 May 2020
- 19:5919:59, 12 May 2020 diff hist +776 Ethnic conflict →Examples of ethnic conflicts: Reordered list of examples to demote USA bias as well as adding critical cross-links to contextualize the use of the term "race war" in the United States as a rhetorical tactic rather than empirical reality. More work is needed beyond my expertise, as detailed in an invisible note. Tag: Visual edit
15 April 2020
- 22:3722:37, 15 April 2020 diff hist +23 Deep state →State-as-actor: added definition for critical term Tag: Visual edit
- 22:3522:35, 15 April 2020 diff hist −11 Deep state →State-as-actor vs. state-as-venue: added citation for citation needed Tag: Visual edit
25 March 2020
- 02:4402:44, 25 March 2020 diff hist +795 User:Icy13/Deep state typo fix Tag: Visual edit
- 02:4302:43, 25 March 2020 diff hist +1,404 Talk:Deep state Added talk entry for possibly controversial "Popular Understanding" section in the article
- 02:3502:35, 25 March 2020 diff hist +474 Deep state Reworded lede to more accurately represent neutral encyclopedic tone as well as reflect the greatly expanded new sections dealing with scholarly understanding of "the state" and the "deep state" which are now explained in new sections added below. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:3402:34, 25 March 2020 diff hist +3,690 Deep state →State-as-actor vs. state-as-venue: provided clear delineation of the two concepts in subsections with linkouts to other wiki pages which are directly relevant Tag: Visual edit
- 02:3302:33, 25 March 2020 diff hist +2,048 Deep state →Scholarly understanding: Further fleshed out new section (migrated from my sandbox) to explain the scholarly understanding of the concept "deep state" Tag: Visual edit
- 02:3202:32, 25 March 2020 diff hist +5,995 Deep state Reworked "Overview" section in two three substantive sections to both increase quality of the page as well as remove "overview' which is considered poor Wikipedia style. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:2402:24, 25 March 2020 diff hist +835 User:Icy13/Deep state Substantial improvement of the lede to reflect a neutral tone while acknowledging the common usage of conspiratorial tone Tag: Visual edit
- 02:0202:02, 25 March 2020 diff hist +2,584 User:Icy13/Deep state →State-as-actor: section finished. →Popular understanding: section given some content and invisible notes Tag: Visual edit
- 00:5900:59, 25 March 2020 diff hist +15 User:Icy13/Deep state →State-as-actor: section link for capacity Tag: Visual edit
- 00:4800:48, 25 March 2020 diff hist +243 User:Icy13/Deep state →State-as-actor: added state capacity definition from capacity building article on Wikipedia. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:4300:43, 25 March 2020 diff hist +754 User:Icy13/Deep state →State-as-venue: added substantial flesh out to this and following state-as-actor sections Tag: Visual edit
- 00:1700:17, 25 March 2020 diff hist +795 User:Icy13/Deep state →State-as-venue: fleshed out section with crosslinks and citation Tag: Visual edit
24 March 2020
- 23:5823:58, 24 March 2020 diff hist −25 User:Icy13/Deep state →State-as-venue: updating citation forms Tag: Visual edit
- 23:5123:51, 24 March 2020 diff hist +22 User:Icy13/Deep state →Overview: Renamed residual section which has largely been developed into the →Scholarly understanding: to reflect remaining content which is predominantly about the words themselves Tag: Visual edit
- 23:4923:49, 24 March 2020 diff hist +7 m User:Icy13/Deep state →Scholarly Understanding: integrated style suggestions given by Elysia (Wiki Ed) on https://en.chped.com/wiki/User_talk:Icy13/Deep_state Tag: Visual edit
- 23:4423:44, 24 March 2020 diff hist +267 User:Icy13/Deep state →Scholarly Understanding: revised final paragraph to clarify normative vs. positive aspects of scholarly understanding Tag: Visual edit
- 23:3323:33, 24 March 2020 diff hist +18 User:Icy13/Deep state →Bibliography: source editing for bibliography Tag: Visual edit: Switched
- 23:3023:30, 24 March 2020 diff hist +27 User:Icy13/Deep state →References: Added a bibliography section to allow for clean multi-cite Tag: Visual edit
19 March 2020
- 16:3916:39, 19 March 2020 diff hist +350 User:Icy13/Deep state →Scholarly Understanding: added citations about polisci normative v. positive Tag: Visual edit
- 16:2416:24, 19 March 2020 diff hist +1 m User:Icy13/Deep state →Scholarly Understanding: typo Tag: Visual edit
- 16:2216:22, 19 March 2020 diff hist +384 User:Icy13/Deep state preparing for migration by making notes into invisible comments in scholarly understanding section Tag: Visual edit
25 February 2020
- 21:3921:39, 25 February 2020 diff hist +402 Wikipedia:Bot requests →Address implicit/structural composition gender bias by bot: new section
18 February 2020
- 06:0906:09, 18 February 2020 diff hist +874 User talk:Elysia (Wiki Ed) →Science and Society course assistance request: submit feedback request as part of WikiEdu course
11 February 2020
- 21:2221:22, 11 February 2020 diff hist +16 m User:Icy13/Deep state →Intellectual History of Concept: testing footnotes Tag: Visual edit
- 21:1721:17, 11 February 2020 diff hist +16 User:Icy13/Deep state →Intellectual History of Concept: page numbers Tag: Visual edit
- 21:0621:06, 11 February 2020 diff hist +1 User:Icy13/Deep state →Scholarly Understanding: typo Tag: Visual edit
- 20:5720:57, 11 February 2020 diff hist +312 User:Icy13/Deep state more intellectual history fleshout Tag: Visual edit
- 20:5520:55, 11 February 2020 diff hist +5 m Political science I have changed all references to Behaviouralism/behaviour (British English) to Behavioralism/behavior (American English) as that is how this American-led movement in the 1930's onward spelled it. I absolutely understand that spelling policing is very often bad wiki practice, but in this case the American spelling is important in order to match the article(s) which are linked to (Behavioralism & Human behavior). Inconsistency in spelling is very often irrelevant but here it is not. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:3220:32, 11 February 2020 diff hist +868 User:Icy13/Deep state →Intellectual History of Concept: creating this section from stubb note Tag: Visual edit
- 16:4516:45, 11 February 2020 diff hist +836 User:Icy13/Deep state Moved a blurb about scholarly understanding from the "overview" section to the intro to the "scholarly understanding" section and added additional discussion of normativism vs. positivism (a critical distinction when dealing with controversial political concepts such as this article) Tag: Visual edit
- 16:2716:27, 11 February 2020 diff hist +1,221 User:Icy13/Deep state →State-as-actor: Copied over "State Autonomy within institutionalism" section from State (polity) article. Tag: Visual edit
- 16:2116:21, 11 February 2020 diff hist +4 User:Icy13/Deep state →State-as-actor vs. State-as-venue: changed hatnote from main article to see also Tag: Visual edit
4 February 2020
- 21:5721:57, 4 February 2020 diff hist +57 User:Icy13/*scratchpad added DGG current Tag: Visual edit
- 21:2521:25, 4 February 2020 diff hist 0 m User:Icy13/Deep state →State-as-actor vs. State-as-venue: fixing typography Tag: Visual edit
- 21:2321:23, 4 February 2020 diff hist +63 User:Icy13/Deep state →State-as-actor vs. State-as-venue: added main page banner (perhaps test) Tag: Visual edit
28 January 2020
- 21:3021:30, 28 January 2020 diff hist +89 User:Icy13/sandbox added quick ref links current Tag: Visual edit: Switched
- 21:2821:28, 28 January 2020 diff hist +171 User:Icy13/*scratchpad added link for politics project request for assessment Tag: Visual edit
- 21:1321:13, 28 January 2020 diff hist −1 m User:Icy13/Deep state →Social Media Usuage - 4chan, 8chan, reddit: typo Tag: Visual edit
- 20:3420:34, 28 January 2020 diff hist +756 User:Icy13/Deep state more blocking out of revisions Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2620:26, 28 January 2020 diff hist +788 User:Icy13/Deep state →Scholarly Understanding: further blocking out of section themes Tag: Visual edit
- 20:1820:18, 28 January 2020 diff hist +1,075 User:Icy13/Deep state added and blocked out the Scholarly understanding section based on the polisci literature Tag: Visual edit
- 19:5719:57, 28 January 2020 diff hist +226 Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Politics →"Signing Out" the Deep state article for substantial overhaul: added signature
- 19:5719:57, 28 January 2020 diff hist +668 Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Politics signed out the deep state page
