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21 June 2024
- 19:5319:53, 21 June 2024 diff hist +895 Talk:Greenhouse gas →Changes made to structure and lead: Reply current Tag: Reply
20 June 2024
- 23:0423:04, 20 June 2024 diff hist −95 Causes of climate change Trimming back unnecessary sentence. Best to talk about what's in the chart, not what's absent.
- 20:5820:58, 20 June 2024 diff hist +5 Climate change →Causes of recent global temperature rise: Further tweaks to the physical drivers caption to help with clarity, drawing from other wiki pages
- 20:5520:55, 20 June 2024 diff hist +22 m Greenhouse gas Further caption tweak
- 20:5420:54, 20 June 2024 diff hist +184 Carbon dioxide in Earth's atmosphere →Effects of current increase current
- 20:5120:51, 20 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Climate change →Causes of recent global temperature rise
- 20:5020:50, 20 June 2024 diff hist +109 Causes of climate change Clarifying lead image caption
- 20:4720:47, 20 June 2024 diff hist +109 Climate change →Causes of recent global temperature rise: Clarifying caption of physical drivers chart
- 20:4520:45, 20 June 2024 diff hist +92 Greenhouse gas Clarifyinig chart caption
- 17:3617:36, 20 June 2024 diff hist +676 Talk:Greenhouse gas →Changes made to structure and lead: Reply Tag: Reply
- 17:2917:29, 20 June 2024 diff hist −713 Greenhouse gas Reorganizing last 2 paragraphs of lead, which didn't seem to me to have discrete topics. They just redundantly covered GHG emissions. The third paragraph now covers greenhouse gas emissions, while the last paragraph puts them in context of natural GHGs. Added a bit that introduces paleoclimatology.
- 15:0315:03, 20 June 2024 diff hist +620 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →Sentence in lead about physical feedbacks is difficult to read: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 15:0115:01, 20 June 2024 diff hist +47 Climate change feedbacks Edit to physical feedbacks as per talk page discussion
18 June 2024
- 23:2223:22, 18 June 2024 diff hist +879 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →Sentence in lead about physical feedbacks is difficult to read: Reply Tag: Reply
- 15:4415:44, 18 June 2024 diff hist +2 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →Sentence in lead about physical feedbacks is difficult to read
- 15:3715:37, 18 June 2024 diff hist +13 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →Sentence in lead about physical feedbacks is difficult to read
- 15:3515:35, 18 June 2024 diff hist +1,221 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →Sentence in lead about physical feedbacks is difficult to read: Reply Tag: Reply
17 June 2024
- 20:2320:23, 17 June 2024 diff hist +6 Climate change feedbacks →Definition and terminology: To untorture the first sentence I split it into two.
- 20:1520:15, 17 June 2024 diff hist +5 Climate change feedbacks →Definition and terminology: Adding back in the "only" before sometimes, as that's the key point. I don't think the sentence makes sense without it.
- 16:2216:22, 17 June 2024 diff hist −38 Climate change feedbacks Tightening up caption of lead image. Now begins by describing the image, then follows with the feedbacks detail.
- 16:1516:15, 17 June 2024 diff hist −54 Climate change feedbacks Undid revision 1229551938 by EMsmile (talk) Sorry, this change is much more awkward to read. To split a sentence you must have separate subjects for each sentence. Tag: Undo
- 16:1416:14, 17 June 2024 diff hist +6 Climate change feedbacks →Definition and terminology: I don't think it's accurate to say the planck response is "how" objects emit more radiation as they warm. Rather, it simply states that they do so and how much they do so. Tweaked wording to reflect that.
15 June 2024
- 19:5319:53, 15 June 2024 diff hist +496 Climate change feedbacks →Definition and terminology: Adding simplified verison of climate change feedback defintion as per talk page discussion.
- 19:5319:53, 15 June 2024 diff hist +117 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →Addressing the issue of what is a climate change feedback in the definition section: Reply Tag: Reply
- 16:0416:04, 15 June 2024 diff hist −54 Climate change feedbacks →Definition and terminology: The general definition of feedbacks was not specific to climate science, so eliminating that qualifier and tightening up the wording.
14 June 2024
- 21:4121:41, 14 June 2024 diff hist +716 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →Addressing the issue of what is a climate change feedback in the definition section: Reply Tag: Reply
- 18:1818:18, 14 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Climate change will --> would, as this is really not being practically discussed anymore
- 18:0818:08, 14 June 2024 diff hist +2,035 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →Addressing the issue of what is a climate change feedback in the definition section: new section Tag: New topic
- 17:4817:48, 14 June 2024 diff hist −169 Climate change feedbacks →Definition and terminology: Consolidating the two definitions of feedbacks that were offered.
- 17:3417:34, 14 June 2024 diff hist +644 Climate change feedbacks →Definition and terminology: Attempting to synthesize the talk page discussion on whether the Planck response is a feedback into the definition section. Tag: Reverted
- 16:5816:58, 14 June 2024 diff hist +6 Climate change feedbacks typo fix
13 June 2024
- 22:3622:36, 13 June 2024 diff hist +169 Climate change feedbacks Reworked the first paragraph. The definitional sentence now speaks in terms of GGE instead of forcings to avoid jargon, plus it now avoids redundancy with the second sentence. The second sentence is unchanged. The third sentence is new and covers what feedbacks influence. The last sentence now defines forcings and climate sensitivity.
- 20:3920:39, 13 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Climate change →Greenhouse gases
- 20:3820:38, 13 June 2024 diff hist +24 m Climate change →Greenhouse gases: Fixing wiki link
11 June 2024
- 19:0319:03, 11 June 2024 diff hist +229 Ruth Bader Ginsburg Reverting edit to last paragraph of lead. Her decision to retire is her most important legacy, and should be put into context rather than being swept under the carpet.
- 18:5218:52, 11 June 2024 diff hist −186 Climate change →Climate change feedbacks: Condensing feedbacks section from 4 paragraphs to 3 paragraphs, cutting about 20 words, and reorganizing the content. Content is now organized into overview, radiative feedbacks, and then carbon feedbacks. No real changes of substance, but I think it reads better and of course shorter is better.
10 June 2024
- 21:1321:13, 10 June 2024 diff hist +21 Climate change →Climate change feedbacks: Correcting a sentence on feedbacks. Feedbacks are not necessarily positive at present, it depends on what you take into account. What is clear is that feedbacks are trending positive, so the sentence is now settled on that point. Also bumping the sentence forward, as it is more important than the issue of uncertainty.
- 19:0519:05, 10 June 2024 diff hist −31 Climate change feedbacks wording tweak, as some co2 feedbacks are not temperature driven
- 19:0219:02, 10 June 2024 diff hist −434 Climate change feedbacks Last 3 paragraphs of lead are now planck response, physical / biological feedbacks, then modeling. I called out planck response to better reflect femke's viewpoint that Planck response is special (it's much larger and happens without atmosphere). This also lets us group content on net feedbacks, including the runaway greenhouse effect sentence. I also condensed some content on uncertainty.
- 18:0018:00, 10 June 2024 diff hist 0 Climate change feedbacks Further tweak to lead paragraph wording
- 17:2917:29, 10 June 2024 diff hist −158 Climate change feedbacks The lead paragraph really said not very much at all. I tightened up the wording and pulled forward the beginning of the third paragraph, which is some of the most important information in the lead.
9 June 2024
- 18:5818:58, 9 June 2024 diff hist +412 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →New lead graphic proposal: Reply Tag: Reply
8 June 2024
- 17:5317:53, 8 June 2024 diff hist +1,047 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →New lead graphic proposal: Reply Tag: Reply
- 17:5317:53, 8 June 2024 diff hist −1,359 Climate change feedbacks Swapping out lead graphics as per talk page discussion
7 June 2024
- 23:4723:47, 7 June 2024 diff hist +3 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →New lead graphic proposal
- 23:4523:45, 7 June 2024 diff hist +1,826 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →New lead graphic proposal
6 June 2024
- 17:5617:56, 6 June 2024 diff hist −696 Climate change Undoing edits by אלכסנדר סעודה and Sgubaldo adding specific law in Vermont. That information is way too detailed for a high level article like this, and is not even part of "Climate change mitigation", which this section is based on. Please review that article for changes or open discussion on talk page if you want to discuss.
- 16:3616:36, 6 June 2024 diff hist +1,210 Talk:Climate change feedbacks →New lead graphic proposal: Reply Tag: Reply
5 June 2024
- 20:5320:53, 5 June 2024 diff hist +5 Climate change →Temperature records prior to global warming: Moving statement about current warming to correct location in sequence. The topic of the last paragraph in that section is the holocene.
30 May 2024
- 17:2817:28, 30 May 2024 diff hist +7 m Climate change feedbacks wording tweak